The fall of a loved one.

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The fall of a loved one.

Post by Littlepip on Mon Jul 22, 2013 2:54 pm

"I'm falling" The sound of wind pass my ears is loud and I feel the strong wind in my hair, no ground beneath me, no hope. What happened..? I remember sitting on my horse when it suddenly went insane..

Thor notice that he is crying, while looking up towards the others, watching his friends looking over the edge towards him. "Why em I crying..? I'm finally free.." He smiles to himself while looking up at the others he moves up his right hand and waves at them.

The ravine is steep and filled with water crashing towards the ravines stone walls, he hears the first splash from his horse, a loud neighing coming from him before it hits the water, ending the noise.

Thor slowly turns around and looks towards the deep blue water with only a few words in his head. "If I survive this, I will serve the light.. I will never drink again, never lie or smoke.. I will use my time to help people.. And I will even make Allonia smile." Thor whispers the words low to himself as he catches up with his tears, he can't help but chuckle a little at the end. "Make Allonia smile? That will never happen."

A splash is heard trough the ravine as Thor hits the ice cold water.


The end.

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Re: The fall of a loved one.

Post by Cid on Tue Jul 23, 2013 3:34 am

Damn, despite summer this short story made me get chilly in a scary way.Shocked 

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Post by siegmund on Tue Jul 23, 2013 3:39 am

Make Allonia smile
Has been done, just it's not really a easy task. Shame you didn't see how things went at the camp later on.

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Re: The fall of a loved one.

Post by Charlie Blazesong on Tue Jul 23, 2013 4:39 am

Damnit I should of DMed a dwarf coming out of the bushes to say "That was me sister you idiot!" instead of letting it be..^^

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Re: The fall of a loved one.

Post by Littlepip on Tue Jul 23, 2013 2:22 pm

Jens wrote:"That was me sister you idiot!"
Wh-.. What?

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Re: The fall of a loved one.

Post by Charlie Blazesong on Wed Jul 24, 2013 6:43 am

Would have made his fall more comedic if a dwarf came out of the bushes and threw a stone before he ran away ^^

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