Rock and sea- a poem

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Rock and sea- a poem

Post by Darilas on Mon Jul 08, 2013 6:49 am

Rock and sea


The sea is warm, its pull is strong
My back is broken from the fight
But here I lay, sprawled, on my rock
Keep me from drowning in the tide
At times I hate its grip on me
I want it to let go
Just dissapear into the sea
My rock, it loves me so
And when I drown, my body floats
On top of cruel waves
Would it smash down on loving rock
Or wash ashore, be safe
For all the love, the luring sea
With multiplying arms
Will pull and pull until I give
The cruel sea, it warms

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Re: Rock and sea- a poem

Post by Dareil Sin'Valor on Mon Jul 08, 2013 12:47 pm

Very beautiful. I like the simplicity and the many meanings.

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Re: Rock and sea- a poem

Post by Dr.Luciouz Dalton on Sun Jul 21, 2013 6:46 am

I loved it! its perfect and really gorgoues!

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