The birth of Thistla

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The birth of Thistla

Post by Alakina on Mon Mar 29, 2010 10:50 pm

I dont know where this topic belongs exaclty since its more a comic than a written story.
If i placed it wrong i appologize and ask you to move it to its right place.

And pls dont judge to hard Very Happy first attempt for me to ever try anything like this in comicstyle xD i had fun though.

The birth of Thistla part 1
The birth of Thistla part 2

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Re: The birth of Thistla

Post by Cathee Piner on Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:08 am

Very nice looking and an interesting story. There's only one thing I'd criticize. The speech bubbles, I got a bit confused as to which to read first and accidentally read the second one before the first one on two occasions. Perhaps make the one to read first a bit higher up then the second one or some such? Smile

Still though, nicely done overall.

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Re: The birth of Thistla

Post by Alakina on Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:17 am

thanks saihna, i actually thought of that but it was to late when i already got the pix together..guess i didnt see it until the end since i know how it should be. anyways i will fix that in other comics if i do other ones Smile

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Re: The birth of Thistla

Post by Guest on Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:59 am

That's new. And It's fun to read Felitzia's story of "missing her beauty" and this lass going all "wooohooo I'm undead new powers!".
I also accidentaly read one of the bubbles wrong, read the second before the first. Neutral

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Re: The birth of Thistla

Post by Cid on Wed Mar 31, 2010 12:12 am

Quite good I say, need some drama to harshen things up when Dorik takes a break with his misadventures.

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